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Friday, May 26, 2017

DouDou And The Deadly Duck

This is my story that I did in silent writing time for my step out writing and I was trying to make a good story for stepping out and making actions for cause we are looking at our writing this term. I would love to share it with you. its about a boy called Douay that has a good imagination and saw a deadly duck that is real and gets eaten and then his mum got a new kid and they mange to stay alive in the end hope you enjoy!
Once when Douay woke up he walked slowly down the stairs, and saw a duck that looked deadly. So he told his mum and she said it’s just your crazy imagination but Douay did not listen and went to look for the duck. And then it ate him and his mum saw it and then ran away quickly!


Then 5 years later she decided to adopted a baby boy and then the duck came back. But this time she took the chance and then her baby son took his first steps and with the help of her dead son they both stayed alive and they lived happily not so happily ever after the end!

So I hope you enjoyed and please leave a comment and I'll check back later bye
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

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